The Last seven months of Anne Frank
By: Willy Lindwer
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There is one very main character in my story called Anne-Frank many people know about her, I think all of middle school knows who she is. Anne Frank had long dark hair, she was very happy with it but unfortunately she had to have it shaved in the camp. On page 28 it says "she had always been very proud of her hair. It may have grown back a bit in the meantime, but it certainly wasn't the long hair she had before" on page 16 it also states that Anne liked her long hair " She was always busy with her hair. She had long hair and she was always fussing with it. her hair kept her busy all the time" In the book there are many pictures of Anne-Frank but not that many physical descriptions but from the photos i can see, she had dark, curly hair,she wore dresses and dressed fancy. Anne Frank was a typical girl, she liked getting boy's attention and she could dislocate her shoulder, she usually did it to freak people out " Boys really liked her and she always liked it a lot when all the boys paid attention to her" page 16. Anne Frank was like any girl of 13 years.
By: Willy Lindwer
Read: 85/203
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Hi :)! You did a good job explaining how she looked physically and had good passages but you could add some more description on her personality... :D
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ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading eveyrthing you wrote, because it was clear, it had god details and most importantly I learned something new. I like how you made the things in " " bigger and bolder because it was much easier to read, and plus it looks really neat. The only thing I would consider doing, If I was in your place was maybe making all the letters (except the ones bolded) a bit bigger, and maybe saying something more about her personality, but I still think you did an excellent job ,and I hope you keep up the awesome work! :)
-Kiki <33