Enders Game
By: Orson Scott Card\
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One of the obstacles my protagonist Ender has gone through is in the begging of the book people from the battle school came to Enders house and had told him that they saw how he had hurt the kid that was about to beat him up. The people or commanders had come to Enders house to ask him if he wanted to come then Ender had to make a tough decision. He had to chose to go and not see his family or come back until he is 18 or stay with his family. He chose to go to the school though now he is regretting that choice. He chose to go because the commander that had come was telling him that he was only a third and that his parents nor sibling will miss him especially Peter his older brother that could have killed him many times. Though what that commander said was a total lie. Now he had to leave battle school three years early since he had outgrow there expectations and now he has to take on the real enemy the buggers. Ender is stronger then the buggers everyone knows that he had his own army and they didn't lose a single battle and neither did he. Ender has also had to deal with many bullies since he is the best and they just don't want to admit that they think that they will be able to beat him though he is unstoppable. The latest fight he had was against Bonzo, Ender did win even though the fight was unfair Bonzo is three years older and did have a gang with him though he did not let them fight too. Ender was almost killed though he managed to knock Bonzo right out. That same day Ender woke up from his nap screaming thinking he was a killer then some commanders came in his room and told his that he was leaving the school to be a real commander. After he had left he heard that a kid was killed it was the second kill in the school's history though this time it was a murder.
By: Orson Scott Card\
Read 40 pages
page 160/226
One of the obstacles my protagonist Ender has gone through is in the begging of the book people from the battle school came to Enders house and had told him that they saw how he had hurt the kid that was about to beat him up. The people or commanders had come to Enders house to ask him if he wanted to come then Ender had to make a tough decision. He had to chose to go and not see his family or come back until he is 18 or stay with his family. He chose to go to the school though now he is regretting that choice. He chose to go because the commander that had come was telling him that he was only a third and that his parents nor sibling will miss him especially Peter his older brother that could have killed him many times. Though what that commander said was a total lie. Now he had to leave battle school three years early since he had outgrow there expectations and now he has to take on the real enemy the buggers. Ender is stronger then the buggers everyone knows that he had his own army and they didn't lose a single battle and neither did he. Ender has also had to deal with many bullies since he is the best and they just don't want to admit that they think that they will be able to beat him though he is unstoppable. The latest fight he had was against Bonzo, Ender did win even though the fight was unfair Bonzo is three years older and did have a gang with him though he did not let them fight too. Ender was almost killed though he managed to knock Bonzo right out. That same day Ender woke up from his nap screaming thinking he was a killer then some commanders came in his room and told his that he was leaving the school to be a real commander. After he had left he heard that a kid was killed it was the second kill in the school's history though this time it was a murder.
From what you write enders game sounds really interesting however I must add my criticism and say that what you wrote is really confusing. Who is peter? Who are the buggars? Is he just a serial killer. You have the details but you need to structure it a bit more, because otherwise it just falls apart. Other than that though good blog post.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kresten for the most part, though the fact that you used examples from the story gave me a better view of the obstacles the protagonist faced.
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