Harry potter and the Philosophers stone
J.K. Rolling
Max. A
Ms.s
7A
23/1/2013
In the chapter i read it was not very interesting but it got you a hang of the story so what happened there was going to be a born baby witch was Harry and when everyone knew that there became something strange Harries family where very surprised because there was something going on everyone had cloaks and owls where flying on day time. it was really weird but they didnt now what was happening.
I think its going to be a pretty good book because its already getting a hang on me.
J.K. Rolling
Max. A
Ms.s
7A
23/1/2013
In the chapter i read it was not very interesting but it got you a hang of the story so what happened there was going to be a born baby witch was Harry and when everyone knew that there became something strange Harries family where very surprised because there was something going on everyone had cloaks and owls where flying on day time. it was really weird but they didnt now what was happening.
I think its going to be a pretty good book because its already getting a hang on me.
Next time check over work, there were many grammatical issues like the starting of a sentence with a lower case letter, saying Harries instead of the correct Harry's (possessive),on instead of in, and the name of the book is the sorceress stone not philosophers stone.
ReplyDeleteNext time check everything and try to make a higher quality of work.