The Snake Charmer
By Jamie Jamie
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the main character in my book is a man named Joe Slowinski he is a very courageous and loves to take risks because he and his friend liked to catch snakes by the river bed when they were little and he held venomous snakes with his bare hands. "As the end of the school year was drawing to a close, Craig Maughan, Joe's biology teacher asked the class for volunteers to take care of the animals over summer vacation. Joe immediately made claims to the boa constrictor" ( 12% James Jamie) this proves that Joe really loves snakes.
By Jamie Jamie
read 49%
the main character in my book is a man named Joe Slowinski he is a very courageous and loves to take risks because he and his friend liked to catch snakes by the river bed when they were little and he held venomous snakes with his bare hands. "As the end of the school year was drawing to a close, Craig Maughan, Joe's biology teacher asked the class for volunteers to take care of the animals over summer vacation. Joe immediately made claims to the boa constrictor" ( 12% James Jamie) this proves that Joe really loves snakes.
Nice! I liked the quote you chose to defend your reasoning and how you wrote this paragraph but next time when you start a sentence you should use a capital letter. Good Job after all :)
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