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Tuesday, October 11, 2011

My book week 4

So after they found the portal they went through it. They were transported to where David and Phemus were fighting. They crashed into Phemus and ran thought the portal that lead them home. When they came they were relived but they realized that David still had the dagger of Phemus so he could come were they are. They were going carefully obzerving the house when they say Phemus, the ran full speed without looking back to a room in the house. The used planks and nails to block anyone coming in but Phemus slammed against the door and broke it. He landed on Keal. He was trying to stab him but Keal was rolling and dodge it. Xander came and distracted Phemus until Keal could get away. They got in their car and drove away. Then they realized that the portal would suck him back in, in a certain amount of time. They calculated it to 5 hours and went to get ice-cream. They were enjoying it until suddenly David couldn't eat anymore and was depressed because they wernt any closer to mom.

1 comment:

  1. I read all your post about this particular book, and I still think you need to put more detail and descriptions into them.

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