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Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Phantom Tollboth

It started with Milo finding a mysterious package in his bedroom. He the conflict was internal because he wasn't sure if he should bother trying the thing because he normally isn't interested in anything.  I think the author started this story this way because he wanted the readers to want to read on to see what is in the mystery package. For now most of the conflicts are internal they are mostly caused for not thinking or because the new world the character is too confusing and that world is differently working than our world. The author crates suspense by writing about the weird way that that world functions. I think that this book will end by Milo returning Rhyme  and rhythm then going back into his reality and being interested in more a lot of things.

5 comments:

  1. Very interesting. I like it! keep it up Charli!

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  2. Nice Charlie like how you wrote it :)

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  3. Nice man. I like the way you showed what you know

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  4. Nice man. I like the way you showed what you know

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